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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Just me Crystal memories of yesterday drift in and out with a haunting sweetness. Child like giggles savoring summer waves Night winds of gayety beach pyres within a whispering haze. Grinning ear to ear, feeling old friends with a purity of thought. Laughing out loud with time their souls had bought. Feeling loves of forgotten times lost ferries of a long dormant youth. Swimming waters finding life of an aged old coot. ‘Twas a good run most will never know midnight bike rides howling at the moon. Sewing oats of youthful experiences loving loves of my life, till they swoon. It’s dog years we live my friend and life’s to short a living, So give it all you got before it winds up a given. Sew your oats a quickly and run to the nearest tree carve you name within it’s bark put her name and then say just me. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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gothicmoth Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 89 |
This one flows really well and the word choices are excellent. My favorite lines are "Laughing out loud with time/their souls had bought." The nostalgic bug seems to be catching around here. Wonderful work, Joel the wolf. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Joel,...you see, now I am feeling all reserved in my replying....thank you. (Go check out Isis's Imagine once again). hehe. I am going to simply say that I enjoyed reading this and found it's message to hold much importance. Well written. Lovely images. Take care. *Peace. |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
Joel... sigh you make me nostalgic for times that weren't even mine. Great flow, great rhythm, like memories coming and going. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Dad, I too howl with past memories both good and bad, and I too miss that zest from youth. We still have it, it just isn't as RAW as it used to be. I'd have loved to know you then!! LOL Melancholy in small doses is good hon, just don't live or hide in the past. Love ya big fella!!  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Whew...Somtimes the pain of life eclipses our zest for life... Thanks for an eye opener the time is too short not to enjoy it! Click |
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