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A Spot On The Wall
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A Spot On The Wall |
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**STAR** Junior Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 26San Diego, Ca. |
A spot on the wall that changes and grows. I can see it but no one knows. Thoughts in my head are they real. The paint on the wall begins to peal. The sights of illusions change my mind. Everywhere I look thing of the kind. This world apears before my eyes. my vision blurs weeps and sighs. Tracers cross the burning sky. Running hot until they die. A trail of dust left behind. All of the sights they'd blow your mind. Dreams that grow deep in you. Forever haunting and coming true. The colors I hear get to loud. The sounds I see begin to croud. The feelings I taste seem so dry. The foods I sense begin to cry. This world I've entered is different you see. Everything is wild and backwards to me. I've looked for a way to get back out. I see people pass they can't hear me shout. Someone please hear my call. Forever traped in the spot on the wall. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Welcome to the border of the land of the near insane. At least it is close it would seem. very good work here Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Star...Very good..excellent really. Very descriptive. Thanks...Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Like this one too. I've been feeling a little like that myself lately. Spot on the wall, what a good way to put it. Cat.. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Its funny until someone says it?? Spot on the wall, very interesting concept here, I liked it alot!!!! The choices we make..will without doubt..direct the lives that we lead. Anonymous |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
excellent work here. the rhyme makes it that much better!!! i enjoyed this. thank you for sharing. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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**STAR** Junior Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 26San Diego, Ca. |
Thanx all for your input. A guy at work showed me this sight. I've got about 1500 poems that have just been sitting in folders at home. Some are better than others but all of them are my thoughts and feelings. A bit scarry Wait till you see some of the others. |
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