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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
the dreamy glow of Bedlam in your belladonna grace your deadly Venus beauty will torment me this heavenly night Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm... different Uta! I know this may sound weird! But it sorta reminded me of a ballerina, for some reason! Don't know why - it's just what came to mind. It's very good!  |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Wow, Uta...is this ever true. Especially when you understand what a succubus is. Good show, M'lady. Hardrock |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ehem ... :0 ... Well, I just looked up the word in the dictionary... I confess, I didn't know what it meant!!! Hmm.... the poem has a different meaning now |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow,...is this thing packed. I too had to use a dictionary,(hehe)...but gosh,...your poems are so direct. I so enjoy your work,..these little (in no way little,little,...you know what I mean),...these little pieces so full to the brim. Great work. Take care. *Peace. ~BTW,...why does everyone call you Uta? I feel a bit uninformed or something.  .*PS,...curious about that dream???? hehe. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
"Belladonna grace"..... Where do these words of yours come from? Amazing, really, how you keep pouring out these gorgous poems! Once again, you've created a winner! -Wren |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
Wow. This one caught me right in the occult addiction. "Belladonna grace"-- fantastic line. Bravo. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Thanks for your friendly comments !!!Tara, perhaps it was the belladonna grace that got you thinking of ballet? Marvin, thanks She’s a devil isn’t she? Spitfire, uta is my real name, pronounced ou (as in you, but without the “y”) tah. I’m afraid I can’t really enlighten you on the dream, because all I can remember is that something melodramatic was happening and then a comment of yours appeared, in the characteristic purple comic type with Take care. *Peace. at the end. And then everything was hunky-dory. It seems that you have some kind of profound calming effect on my nerves. Funny, since I don’t know you at all! Wren, thanks you’re good with words too! Portia, what a great phrase: “This one caught me right in the occult addiction”. Wow! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, so many great words in such a small space. I concur with all of the above. It hit me in more than one addicition.. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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