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His eyes............... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Looking into your eyes I can see the gentle touch Just through your eyes I see the caring and such Yours eyes tell so much Of the person that you are The pain from your past And all the love from afar Your eyes see the future Your heart feels the pain Which one do you follow? Which one will give you gain? Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very nice poem. I like it. A lot. Thanks for sharing it Dark Kisses Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
DkW...very nice. There is so much to be seen in the eyes...and you expressed it well here. Thanks.....Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, I like it too. Wish I could see his eyes right now... "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
lovely poem. I had that feeling once, but it ended in tears  I'm sure that wont't happen to you though!! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
eyes are the windows to the soul. i once had a feeling like this over an ex. but alas sometimes eyes lie. i learnd that the hard way. great poem Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear... MetallicA "I disappear" |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I too read alot about someone through their eyes..My mom said she married my dad because of his kind eyes..for her only death came between 50 yrs of marriage..Excellent poem!!! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
There is a depth you capture in gazing in those eyes and in this poem, very well written. |
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