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The Silence |
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SlyOne Junior Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 16 |
The sky is dark, the rain is falling as I lie here in bed. The thoughts, the emotions, the memories that are running thru my head. I have been trying to understand the silence, the lack of your words. I have been struggling, waiting for the uplifting singing of the birds. To wonder back in time, not so far passed by. The happiness in my heart was racing high in the sky. Many things have bee said, many words tossed about. I feel they have cast a shadow, a wall of doubt. The love in my heart for you remains the same. Many will tell you, to me this is all a game. You know me, I wear my heart on my sleeve, you have heard it in my voice. The things that have happened, all the hurt caused was not my choose. I know that words mean so little, but the silence cuts deep. The disappointment, the hurt, the pain makes my heart weep. To read your words, or hear your voice again. Its the only way to help the pain and hurt start to mend. All I have ever wanted was for you to be happy, to love and be loved the way you deserve to be. And this I hope you can truly see. As I bring to an end the words from my heart deep within. I can only hope for the emotional healing to begin. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Much said in that short space Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~"As I bring to an end the words from my heart deep within",...That is exactly what this sounds like!!! From deep within,...very nice expression. Take care you. *Peace. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
...but the silence cuts deep. Very deep. I know this feeling! |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
I know what you mean!!! Good one. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
The emotional healing can seem to take forever, time seems to stall when we are in pain. Nicely done!! |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Very good poem, thoughtfully worded! Well done! |
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