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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
I will never be an atheist while looking in your eyes For the first time I can belive in something that is not myself If I take the time to listen your heart beat drowns out my mothers prayers A string of kisses Annoint pressure points Bleeding thick sticky passion What are these wounds? You bite me Then lick my cut flesh You press my mouth hard with the palm of your hand As your eyes wisper Be still Be still and know that I am God Note: The last line is not mine....I stole it from a song I sang at church....I thought it fit very well, so I used it. I'm sorry, I don't know exactaly where it came from, but I mean to find out. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh that was great, I think the first line hit me the hardest. Loved it!! "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Don't apologize for the best line in the poem! Really, I loved all of it. Kathleen |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is an intriguing piece. You could be talking about a lover or a mystical vision. Very impressive! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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