Dark Poetry #2 |
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Daddy (PLEASE READ) |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Some other daddies go away but you were always there to stay helping me along my way I love you more than words can say My father, I love you, I really do. And though sometimes its hard to show both you and I have always known we will always, always love each other and you will always love my mother We have been lucky to be this way and I thank God every day that you were always here to say "I love you." And when no boy would ever think to be my valentine you would always be there you will always be mine And I won't ever leave you though I may move away I'll be with you in your heart every single day I am lucky to have a father like you I look around and see other fathers who just don't care the way you do I guess I just wanted to say, I love you daddy, I really do. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How blessed you are to have a wonderful Dad. I hope he reads this too. Very nice poem. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This is the sweetest thing. Definately let him read it. You've written well of the love and admiration for him. Aaww. Thank you for sharing it. *Peace. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well wonderful work as always. i hope you showed this to your dad and i bet he cried. i love all your work there filled with so much meaning. i just wish my life was the same way but thats the way life works. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
awww that just touched my heart its just the way i feel about my dad my parents are divorced & i miss spending time with him he's the only person who's ever understood me ![]() ![]() |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
I am glad you all liked it ![]() ![]() |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This brought tears to my eyes! How lucky you are to have a dad who loves you and how lucky he is to have a daughter who writes him such a poem! I hope all good daddys get praised like this! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
The sweetest words a dad could ever hear. No matter what, our daughters will always be our little girls. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a beautiful tribute to your daddy. ![]() This has my vote! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
wonderful poem and a timely reminder to us al to express our love for our loved ones while they are still around ![]() |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A wonderful tribute. I'm glad you are going to share it with him. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Sweetie, wow. Tell your father you love him everyday... I love mine, He just never lets me tell or show him... Your father is lucky. You have my vote. Jenn |
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