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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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A voice it speaks to me in my dreams, Words of love and encouragement, He the unseen muse, He who knows no judgement. My night time lover, Mine and mine alone, When his creative fingers touch me, I shiver delightedly to the bone. He's had his pain and torment, He has lost a true love, He too, needs a soulmate, A goddess from above. He speaks to me and my senses calm, We sing together in love's harmony, His words of comfort almost a balm, No finer man could there be. Is he reality? Or merely a pipe dream, Does he indeed hear the call, When my soul does scream? Will he always catch me when I fall? The answers? Who knows? I may never know, But the dreams of this special man, I will rejoice in, never let go. In our land of dreaming, There are no problems or pain, We love totally and unselfishly, With him the universe itself is somthing I've gained. So if you'll excuse me, I must go now, Off to visit again this angel of my dreams, For real or not, he brings me happiness and lessens the load somehow......... I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, It is always good when we find one to lessen our load. Hold on to those dreams....they will see you through the rough times. I like this one. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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DarkLisha New Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 4 |
Dreaming is good. They get us all through tough times...I think I should sleep then... "True heros are found within darkness. I have yet to meet a knight who is deprived of being torn between dark and light."-DarkLisha |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Who's voice indeed? LOL Dreams are a comfort to the lonely, now if only this dream guy had a face!!!  Thanks for reading...... I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, dreams are a comfort to the lonely. . .but sometimes. . . Excellent poem my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
But sometimes what Sven?? Email me... I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Hey Isis, this poem is truely wonderful. You dream (is it you dreaming?) of a kindred spirit, someone who understands you in and out, no questions asked. A truely romantic dream. Although in life it's better not to long for a perfect partner, for who is truely perfect? Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Many times have I shared this feeling in the past/present, wondering if my dream girl is out there somewhere. However, I sense that there is a hint that this man may be real in some context, just for now, unseen correct me if I'm wrong. I think I like it here! Excellent work, it's nice to find people I share common interests with. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
He is faceless.. I'm hoping to be able to put a face to him one day.. LOL Firejerm, welcome to the forum and passions!! It can be read many ways, there are hints sure, clever of you to pick it up, but for now he is faceless, a kindred spirit indeed, which is what we all desire.. Glad you like it here so much already and I hope that passions soon becomes your home too!! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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sweetthing61401 New Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 8 |
I believe that the ending to sven's reply "but sometimes..." would have to be sometimes you need more than dreams. It is a wonderful poem isis and hopefully someday soon that man will have a face for you. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
again kid you have touched my heart yes we must dream of ?? our ?? loves. A face does not matter. the heart does. Take this from a man that must sneek up on a glass of water to get a drink. hahaha Love ya kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
JOEL!! Email me to what the question marks mean????? You have aroused this daughter's curiousity maybe>>?? LOL Glad I touched you hon Love ya too!!! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Isis, O Goddess - Sovereign of spirits... Thee dreaming of angels and spirits is but irony indeed, But then every soul must dream dreams, For sometimes, as we all know, it to be true, That these dreams get real, and life shines through... Keep dreaming, Isis, DREAM ON.... by the way, a very nice poem, do you remember the sounds of the voice of the yet faceless angel that you dream of? Regards, sudhir. |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Isis, it is hard isn't it, when we long for something, though we don't know what. But I have found that in life, when we ache and long for things, they rarely happen. However, when we just make the best of what we have and live each day for the moment....sometimes, just sometimes, our dreams come true and the unlooked for arrives like a bolt from the blue. Keep dreaming though, I love your work. Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Never give up the dream Isis! I wrote this many months before I knew who I wrote it for, I was lucky enough to come to know them. I knew who it was long before I ever saw thier face. Dreams do come true. As I lay there, head on the pillow I thought of you often And as the darkness swept over me I saw your face and smiled God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Trisha4_u Junior Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 28 |
Isis, FireJerm and i discussed your poem. *see Jeremy*, "a fantasy lover, a muse who understands the depths of her passions and pain". Yes a kindered spirit. Thank you Isis, it was beautiful. Trisha4u |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
In our land of dreaming, There are no problems or pain, We love totally and unselfishly, With him the universe itself is somthing I've gained. So if you'll excuse me, I must go now, Off to visit again this angel of my dreams, For real or not, he brings me happiness and lessens the load somehow......... Isis a wonderful poem, I especially love the last two stanzas filled with hope and beauty. great poem. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks everyone, this is not a dream I have regularly, just rarely no more than anyone else I suppose. I have a firm grasp on reality and believe in karma. Dreams are often not a reality, but hope, dreams and love are the foundations for getting the best you can in this world. I enthusiastically greet each new day, and await what wonders, joys or tears come my way. If nothing else I am certainly a realist... Glad you all liked this and it provoked such responses  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I believe that hopes and dreams are the most powerful forces in our lives!! They are why we get up in the morning and why we keep going even when we are mortaly hurt! Click |
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