Dark Poetry #2 |
Love Haiku |
allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
All you need is love Love is love is love is love All you need is love We check the minutes Love is on the agenda No further business. We cast our anchor This love has us all at sea Deep waters. We drift. You are my true love Eternal diamond, you live here in my heart. [This message has been edited by allan (edited 07-06-2000).] |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Wow! What has got into you!? These poems are really incredibly sweet. A breath of fresh air! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Oh, I forgot, stylistically perfect as well (as usual, and as you know, I'm sure). I like the throbbing heart and the red, too. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Thanks Uta! Just bored at work, tired of my being SO serious and emerging from an awful bout of depression. All that or else I've caught some virus! Ällän |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Allan, I am glad you are not depressed anymore! BTW, you are not SO serious! No more serious than anyone else. Why the Ä ä? Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
I did it once änd liked it! 8Story of my life? Or epitaph?) Älän Ü |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
I did it once änd I liked it! (Story of my life! Or epitaph maybe??) Älän Ü |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Loved these Allan "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well written haikus Allan! I especially loved the last one Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
delightful sense of humour here...thanx for the read |
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