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Getting By |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Getting By Get by without you? Live all alone? Survive outside of your sunshine? Nothing could hurt more... Lose touch with you? The grace of your presense gone... Forget what you feel like? Nothing could sting more... Get over you? Move away from your gaze... Cherish the independence... Nothing could be more inviting... Feel happiness without you? Know how to be good after you? Triumph beyond your smile? Nothing is more possible... |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is extremely good. An excellent expression of the process of dealing with the demise of a relationship. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes Jenn i to enjoyed this one and understand well. the other day me and tosha almost broke up oooooohh i dislike her so very much. anyway about your poem i enjoyed it alot and love the expression as well so do keep it up my friend. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hey Jeremiah...if you dislike her so much, you need to break it off. I'm sorry about the sitch you're in but I wish you the best.. Jenn |
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