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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-07-06 12:32 PM

Our souls will soon touch
And we will become one
Our lives will just begin
With each new rising sun

Together we can conquer the world
As long as we always care
As long as we always talk
When the world is too much to bare

Today could be our beginning
Tomorrow might be our end
Lets not let the moment go
Lets fly together with the wind

Ahhhhhhhhh dont I wish it was this easy

Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light

DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

1 posted 2000-07-06 12:42 PM

don't we all wish it was that easy! I'd sure be alot happier. really great work here. keep posting.

if you don't like the message, don't kill the messenger.

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

2 posted 2000-07-06 02:27 AM

wow. i loved that. it was that easy for me. then i realized the harsh reality that my life sucks.

i truly loved this alot. please fell free to icq me sometime i would love to talk.
*hugs*
jesse

Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear...
MetallicA "I disappear"

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

3 posted 2000-07-06 07:42 AM

Sometimes things come easier than other times, a very nicely written verse, I liked how you expressed the thoughts and feelilngs!!!

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

4 posted 2000-07-06 02:08 PM

good question why can't things be this easy maybe if people would just open there minds and stuff who knows. well i enjoyed the read very much my friend and do hope to see more soon.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

5 posted 2000-07-06 02:12 PM

Sometimes it is...easy I mean. I liked this very much. As you may tell from my poetry, I know how you feel.

Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.

-William Wordsworth-

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