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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
The sky a permanent deep, deep grey cold, frozen, there is no other way to live inside the frozen day When all other dreams decay depend on the icy frozen day all your feelings go away When you freeze, you will not feel the numbness does not bite your heel you will be happily unreal Because the frozen day ne'er exists it is only a dream, and dreams resist to become alive for who they've kissed so I cry for the pleasure I have missed |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hhhmmm,...the thought of being frozen at times appeals to me. To not feel, to be happily unreal, goodness numbness when it gets that bad is bliss to me. Nicely written poem...although I may have taken it another route your words reached me as they did. Great work. Take care. *Peace. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this rather has a chilling point to it don't you think? i enjoyed it very much and it is great i love it and keep it up my friend. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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