Dark Poetry #2 |
Die (a song) |
tearsinheaven Junior Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 18 |
Please let me die (die) I'm a disgrace to all human kind I drove you away (away) I couldn't make you stay Please let me die (die) Help me break free of this sorrow chorus: If i die, don't take me away If i live, don't make me stay What goes up must come down, All good things must die love is a tragedy and friends never last I fear the future and regret the past Please leave me alone (alone) Please stay...away from me All i do is hurt you (hurt you) All i do is cause you pain please leave me alone (alone) You don't deserve the pain chorus: God will help me (help me) He will surely set me free God will let me die (die) God will let me fly away God will help me (help me) God, let be with you! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I fear the future and regret the past.....Wow!!! What a line. Heavy stuff here. Take care. *Peace. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i feel this to a subperub extent. this is a great piece and i really enjoyed it. do keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Great stuff!! I would really like to hear it put to music! Hope to see more.... ~Sash~ |
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