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Rehtaf Ruo
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
SATAN LIVES I'm a child I'm a wild child I grow in you I'm a growth in you You think I want your soul You're falling down a hole There at the bottom The lowest level Very nice to meet you I'm the DEVIL Crawl Beg You get pain I bite off your leg Scream loud I smile at your songs You can never leave Let's drink to your wrongs Burn Look up at me I grow from your anger Your family is in danger Sins I forgive you for your sins My soul forgives SATAN LIVES |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Firstly, I really like your name! Secondly, I'm a bit stupid and don't understand the title of this poem  Thirdly, I like the poem. There are fiends hiding in all of us. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Dark stuff here, Insect. I believe if you ask any Christian, they will confirm that Satan does indeed live...and walks the earth claiming souls. Others believe there is no Satan....only an evil presence that resides in all of us, fighting a battle with the good that resides there also. I believe your poem captures both believers very well. Thanks.....Hardrock (PS to Uta...the title is "Our Father" backwards...a blaspheme to God) |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
A little morbid - dont you think? Deepak |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a great poem. and i have to say i'm a hell spawn. though i'm a good evil. kind of like an angel of the night. but my friends call me "Mage" for my wiseness and my words. enjoyed the read very much and do keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Let's drink to your wrongs,...mmhhmm Insect, you've gone deep with this one. Morbid is good reading material. haha (for me). Now you see,...THIS is dark writing. Well done. Do a silly one soon,...you're starting to scare me. haha. Take care you. *Peace. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-05-2000).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Iotharingia…insect thanks you Well the tittle is "SANTAN LIVES" when your submitting a poem they ask for a subject, that box can be for the title or what ever you chose to put in it. Most people put the title of the poem or a meaning relating to their poem. In "REHTAF RUO" by reading this you the reader became tricked by Satan into his hell or her hell, Satan can be what ever he/she wants to be depending on if a he or a she is reading the poem! I hope that's not to confusing! Thank you for asking and liking the poem! I am happy with any interpretations or what ever the reader gets from any of my poems because if things were only viewed one way they might get pretty boring after awhile so I like it when people express their thoughts on how they see a poem from any point of view. "Fiends" ~ Excellent ~ Hardrock…Thanks Hardrock after reading your response I kinda wanted "REHTAF RUO" to be the title and I guess it can be. Thanks for pointing out the meaning! "Dark" ~ Burning ~ demoninlove…Yes! Thank you for responding. "morbid" ~ Fantastic ~ Jeremiah Johnson…Thank you for responding "Mr Magician" "hell spawn" ~ Deathly ~ SpitFire…So now I know why you like to hang out in dark! Dark is great and all the poets are great too! "…you're starting to scare me." ~ Just sign here ~ Thanks to all for responding Just some creative writing! *200 |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I personally don't believe in Satan which is actually Hebrew for Enemy there for Satan may not be so literal more of a metaphor. I am sure some of you are thinking of that line form The Usual Suspects. Well I think that man is responsible for himself, if he turns towards evil it will possess him but I don't it is a literal demon more general evil. I am going to bite my tongue at this point because I ma trying to avoid getting caught put in such debates. I am not a religious freak, more interested in the sides of humanity. So I will just say I enjoyed the poem. "Death makes angels of us all and put wings where we once had shoulders, smooth as raven's wings. Jim Morrison |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Insect, Your statement about Satan wanting to be what he wants to be reminds me of a certain novel by a German author called Wilhelm Hauff, "The Memories of Satan". In this book he calls himself Natas, and is an intriguing and even sexy creature (somewhat like the more modern image of the vampire). OH, I'm sorry, this is not relevant really, I'm just ranting. BTW, on the subject of Satan and demons, I too, regard them as merely symbolic, when I say fiends I mean the sub or unconscious, not "real" demons. But Hardrock is right, the poem is relevant regardless of our beliefs, unless we think good and evil do not exist. Blablabla. Sorry  Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Sigmund Freud Junior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 38Come to my couch... |
Please make an appointment with my couch, I vill help you all. Satan cigars are not bad. Freud |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
brian madden…Thanks for responding! Don't have to bite I like hearing what you have to say. Lotharingia…Thank you for responding again! Don't be sorry anything you say is fine. Sigmund Freud…Satan has a lite! Thanks for the reply. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Well of course he lives...otherwise we would have nothing to write about...... Showers of darkness to rain on hope. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Prometheus…Thy shall be knighted for the glory of sin that rains on earth in evil. Sending all man kind to the depths of pain from souls past sold that grow in the wombs of women…….. Thanks for the reply! |
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