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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Well here's to all of the unheard voices...  -------------------------------------- The baby stirred within It's own mothers womb Little did he know, It would be his tomb The abortionists victim, Taken by law Weeping occurring In those who saw The mother made her choice Without the victims voice That tiny little voice, Could gotten a better fate No one deserves Death Not even those that kill Not even those that had their fill But those unwanted gifts-- --are so numerous |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm glad someone finally decided to write a poem about this topic. It's about time. I totally agree with you. Keep up the good work!!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm glad someone finally decided to write a poem about this topic. It's about time. I totally agree with you. Keep up the good work!!! |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm glad someone finally decided to write a poem about this topic. It's about time. I totally agree with you. Keep up the good work!!! |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm glad someone finally decided to write a poem about this topic. It's about time. I totally agree with you. Keep up the good work!!! |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm glad someone finally decided to write a poem about this topic. It's about time. I totally agree with you. Keep up the good work!!! |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well to reply five times you know he really liked it. i enjoyed this very much and totaly agree with you its wrong. and should never be aloud. but as it all goes people are who they are and if there unfair and stupid. well most of them anyways. i liked this very much keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
A very haunting poem. But the topic you have chosen is so very difficult to comment upon. Too complex. You have the flair - keep it up. Deepak Menon |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
definetley powerful stuff. Joy |
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