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qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-07-04 01:06 PM

BLACK PAST

Silent sobs in my pillow.
Buried tears, buried pain.
Hidden from everyone,
can't show how much I really hurt.
False beliefs, confusion.
My lies become the truth.
A past filled of darkness.
Only you can make it bright.
I need your comfort.
PLease help me feel secure.
The nightmares won't go as easily.
Visions of flowers & rainbows,
a childhood escape.
Can't run away forever,
a dead end is coming soon.
Unleashing anger on everyone.
This isn't me at all.
It's easiest to forget & move on,
& pretend I'm someone else.
Hurting everyone, revenge
for my buried pain.
Help me stop, help me forget.
Help me find the missing piece.
I need to feel complete.

~ELMO~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-07-04 04:46 PM

Hi, welcome to Passions. That was a very intense and sad poem. I hope you are not feeling that bad. Take care.
Catalinamoon

"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

2 posted 2000-07-04 09:40 PM

Elmo...the last line says it all for me, "I need to feel complete". Don't we all. Nice work. Enjoyed it. Hardrock (Say Hi to your brother, Tickleme)

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-07-05 02:45 PM

well i voted cause its true we all need to feel complete. and i think the people who are have it all even if they are poor at least they are happy. you know what i mean its so hard to survive sometimes but we all do it. enjoyed the read and keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

4 posted 2000-07-05 07:00 PM

lol hardrock thanx every1 else

luv u all hee hee <3 ELMO

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

5 posted 2000-07-06 09:29 AM

Yes, the fiends from the subconscious are difficult to tame. Love it.

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Portia
Member

since 2000-05-18

Posts 157

6 posted 2000-07-07 01:50 PM

You have captured these feelings perfectly.

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