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Emotional Highway of Love
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Emotional Highway of Love |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA 
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EMOTIONAL HIGHWAY Waiting for that special someone is like hitch hiking on the emotional highway of love. You’re alone for so long, waiting, Then in the distance you see someone approaching, Will they stop? Most just pass on by And you are alone again, In your desert of despair. But when they do stop, it’s so pleasant to ride for awhile, To rest your weary soul and mind, To experience companionship and conversation, To feel that someone cared enough…..just to stop. But beware…..the highway also brings others, Those who stop just long enough to rape, rob And kill your emotions. Leaving you beaten, broken and bleeding beside This emotional highway of love. I guess we all need our own emotional automobile, Just to go cruising……… Marv Hardin 07/04/00 |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh how true Hardrock, and well said, that emotional highway...we do take the wrong exit sometimes...Keep them coming!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, we all stand out there so vulnerable, hoping for the best. Sometimes we get it, but look out for the rest. Ha another spontaneous rhyme, I never used to do that till coming here. I like this poem in structure and feel, as always, and you always say something that touches my heart. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Marvin, another excellent emotional comparison. You are good at these, aren't you?  Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Thanks all....Uta, I'm not really good at it, in fact, it's not even intentional. It's just the way my mind works...I have to have something concrete (no pun intended) to compare emotions to. Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well i can think of alot of pun but if none is intended. well this is another great piece from you and i enjoyed reading a couple times it means mucho about life N love and i happy to see you put it together so well here and do keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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