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Cold Pizza and Heartache
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Cold Pizza and Heartache |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA 
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Remember folks....you heard it here first. Country music radio stand by. Cold Pizza and Heartache Cold pizza and heartache, That’s all that’s left of you. I can’t drive past a Dominoe’s, Cause it only makes me blue. I used to be so happy, When our love was true. Now, cold pizza and heartache, Is all that’s left of you. I sit here, alone each night, And stare at my litttered floor. It’s filled with pizza boxes, Left over from the night before. I loved you and pepperoni, And I thought you loved me too, Now, cold pizza and heartache, Is all that’s left of you. So I’m eating cold pizza and heartache, I’ve gained a hundred pounds. I don’t have call in orders any more, They just bring’em when making their rounds. It’s the only thing I have left to love, Six toppings and a cheesy goo, Now, cold pizza and heartache, Is all that’s left of you. Marv Hardin 07/03/00 |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Being from West Virginia, I can really appreciate the "twang" in those lyrics. Thanks for making me giggle! ~Sash~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well i hope you recover from this pain soon. and i don't like country music but for you i can stand it. LOL. just playing. enjoyed the read keep it up my friend. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Jeremiah....I don't like country music either...especially this kind. But my mind has a mind of it's own sometimes....and this is what pops out. I'm sure you can understand that. Thanks....Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
And my dog ran away, and my truck broke down... Very cute, but serious stuff underneath. Haven't we all sat alone eating cold pizza and missing someone? "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Sad but tongue in cheek, Marvin. Brilliant as usual. Funny how a bit of humour can highlight sorrow. PS this sounds like a song! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I saw a T-shirt this weekend that said, "The fastest way to a womans heart is through her ribs." With pizza. haha ok I'm having fun to. Because I had pizza last night and the night before and the night before, etc,etc. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Yes catalina...I think we all HAVE sat and ate cold pizza and thought of someone...btw hardrock...Alan Jackson is on the phone wanting to buy the rights!...LOL Rod Love one another-let God do the worrying, Rodney |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Very good Hardrock! Send that over here to Houston and you can bet it will get airtime! Life be not God's greatest gift. Of what worth be life without the capability to love? |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
What to do with minds that have minds of their own, huh?  I enjoyed this as a poem, but if I ever heard it as a country song I'd have to turn it off. Lol!Joy |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I'm sorry,...I know it's sad but I had to chuckle,..it's cute. Sad, but cute too. Cold pizza and heartache,...boy, *sigh*. Oh, and yeah, I can TOTALLY understand about your mind having a mind of it's own. Hehe. Take care you. *Peace. |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
You have a talent for humor! But all humor is serious underneath. We've all been there,I know I have! Very good work! I enjoyed reading it! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I dunno 'bout country, it sounds more like Applachian Hill Billy to me(hee hee). Good read...enjoyed it hardrock, remember me when you make your riches. jwesley |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
great job. i liked this alot. counntry?? yes. funny??? yes. but true?? very. i have spent many a night eating cold pizza and playing my guitar missing the one i love. great work. Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear... MetallicA "I disappear" |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I don't feel so bad about the one I wrote now. Of course I don't have the courage to post it here...lol Actually that would probably get air time, if it has a catchy tune. Just add a good hook for the refrain. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I loved this! Kathleen |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Excellent poem! Fun read thanks! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This made me laugh when I needed to laugh. Thank you. A |
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