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Rejection's Regression
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Rejection's Regression |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
REGRESSION'S REJECTION: One by one people come Meet, learn, know To take my heart, a friendship start Then break it, reject, go To leave it there isn't fair I play a role too I try to be true to me But I'm too much for you The moon draws waves to shores As I am drawn to them But full of fear, afraid to be near They turn and leave again What's in me that people see That makes them change their minds? When all I can is what I am Or is it me that's blind? Receive, reject, unkind. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
"The moon draws waves to shores As I am drawn to them But full of fear, afraid to be near They turn and leave again" Wonderful flow throughout. I especialy liked this verse. Even though I sense the longing in the lines, it soothed me. Joy |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi sgreybe Fear of losing someone special is really terrible..and it numbs evrything in you..but don't worry as these feelings will destroy peace. Sincerely A_L |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
The moon draws waves to shores As I am drawn to them But full of fear, afraid to be near They turn and leave again What's in me that people see That makes them change their minds? When all I can is what I am Or is it me that's blind? Receive, reject, unkind. I know what it is like to be rejected and not respected for who I am, you are better off without people like that. Trust me you will find true friends, the knid that will always be there for you. Stay true to yourself and change for no body. A great poem, really enjoyed this and can totally relate. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "You do not destroy an idea by killing people; you replace it with a better one". Edward Keating ----- |
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gothicmoth Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 89 |
Pout. Joy 14 beat me to it. I echo those sentiments about the 3rd stanza and this pieces flows very well. Good job. |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I like!! I feel! Thanks for letting me see. Click |
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