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Dark Poetry #2

Death

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-07-01 03:38 AM

   Another day another death
  That i hold under my breath
       One last chance
       To gasp for air
Cause together I and this world
       Just don't care.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

1 posted 2000-07-01 05:11 AM

A really stifling poem, Jeremiah. One of your best. Great stuff!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

2 posted 2000-07-01 06:35 AM

Gothically Good!
Allan

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

3 posted 2000-07-01 06:53 AM

Terrific one Jeremiah

Liked this poem very much.

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

4 posted 2000-07-01 06:57 AM

Somedays life is not sweet, but it sure beats the alternative. I hope these days don't come very often, really liked the poem. Jeremiah.

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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