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allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

0 posted 2000-06-30 04:17 PM

It took place on a thundrous night
when the heavens opened wide
We all ran out to see the lights
In a tidal wave we cried

No one could believe their eyes
as we wandered in the street
All petty news now out of sight
Each face as white as sheet

It wasn't known where they came from
another star they said
It wasn't fair what then went down

The raising of the dead.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2000-07-01 12:57 PM

very good read much like my own work on a dark scale but in a different style well worth the time spent to write it please keep up the good work.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

2 posted 2000-07-01 05:06 AM

scary stuff Allan, got shivers running down my spine! Brilliantly written as usual! And
an interesting subject too.

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

3 posted 2000-07-01 06:39 AM

Thanks both!
Actually this one was a real quickie!
All done in about 15 mins on-screen - in the midst of a deeply depressive state

'Never mind... 'Free concert here in Vienna today - remember Peter Green of old Fleetwood Mac?

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

4 posted 2000-07-01 07:25 AM

PS. 'Hope you'll read The Coming - Part II.

Allan

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

5 posted 2000-07-01 07:27 AM

A deep one indeed Allan! Goosebumps!!! I am going to read your second one now

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

6 posted 2000-07-01 04:26 PM

Watch the Skies! (Part III soon)

Allan

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

7 posted 2000-07-02 07:25 AM

Oh I got an eerie feeling, liked this very much Allan!! Will be looking for more, very interesting piece

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

8 posted 2000-07-02 09:42 AM

I'll be looking forward to the trilogy. Good stuff, Allan. Hardrock

[This message has been edited by Hardrock (edited 07-02-2000).]

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

9 posted 2000-07-03 08:23 PM

Yes by all means raise the dead, I've got many friends there.
great stuff guy.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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