Dark Poetry #2 |
Kiss Off |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Betrayal still surprises me, I just expect the best. It's not that I'm so stupid, but it never takes a rest. Will I ever learn not to trust a man? Don't want to live like that, but I suppose I can. To those who let me down, let me ask you this... How much more did you want? Not even a goodbye kiss. Over all of these years I gave you nothing but love. You just threw it in my face. Do you think you're God above? I had a choice to make. Who was better for me. You wrapped it up neatly, and now I can see. You never did change, though I imagined you had Once I so loved you, but you're nothing but BAD! |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Many, Many of my exact sentiments written out very well..Its so unfair when we do not recieve back what we so willingly give!!! I enjoyed this very much, You deserve much more |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i feel this also. great piece you express it so well so do keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! This poem is great! Good work. |
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