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An Affair |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Why can't you tell the truth Even when you're faced with proof You continue telling lies As yet another piece of me dies You're pursuing a relationship with her Of this I'm almost sure Friends don't say those things Don't you see the sadness it brings You say that I should trust But my heart has turned to dust I don't know what to do To get this message to you Why does she talk like that Even after her chance to chat She said she didn't know Although she does she won't go What, Lord, would make her cease So life could have some peace There hasn't even been a divorce Yet she continues on this course How does she look herself in the face Knowing she's so out of place The hurt of an affair Brings pain beyond compare Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
Dangerous ground. Well-conveyed, Wolf. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oh what a tangled web we weave when we practice to deceive... ya know i always heard that, but i don't know who wrote it. i really like this one. thank you for sharing. kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
Excellent Mr.Wolf!! Well written, I can relate to this 100%  )-Rich- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Affairs hurt everyone involved. I hate to see any marriage or long term relationship die. It is sad. But from every loss something is gained... I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Portia...yes, it is dangerous ground. Thank you for saying I conveyed it well. Kynder...I don't know who wrote that one either. Wish I could tell you. You are welcome for sharing. Rich...Thank you for the reply, but that would be Ms. Wolf!!! LOL.....don't let the name fool you!!! Sorry you can relate.  Isis...Yes, they do hurt all involved. It is sad, but you just have to take what you have learned and move on. Just something I needed to vent on... |
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Diana Kessler Junior Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 24U.S.A. |
Excellent way to vent. I enjoyed this one greatly. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Excellent vent, my friend. The quote is by Sir Walter Scott btw. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Ms. Lady Wolf, You pinned this one good, could not tell it any better, I learned from what happened and moved on but you do not forget! Very awesome job thankyou for venting. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice expression of your feelings and hurts..my exwife had an affair while still married to me...the guy was temporarily broke up with his wife and she was temporarily broke up with me...they justify it in their minds that it is alright..after all we were not getting along at the time..when he went back with his wife..she called me up and said she was coming back to me...after all this is what they assumed would happen..he would go back and she would go back..I told her she should have asked me about it because I did not intend to live with an unfaithful wife...later they feel the consequences of their actions...thats the way life is...but they really could care less about the one they are being unfaithful to at that moment...just my experiences and my opinion...and yes it was all a very painful experience but the sooner you accept the truth and go on the better...it is never as hard as it seems...James |
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