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Dark Poetry #2

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lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

0 posted 2000-06-30 11:24 AM

those many feral years

seeking heaven
above a savage moon
behind tempest stars
beyond this caustic sky

whoever knew
what you would find?

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

1 posted 2000-06-30 11:28 AM

I LOVE THIS ONE!!

It means sooooo much! It enables the reader to fly into the cosmos on a wonderful trip of discovery

Click
Member

since 2000-06-11

Posts 202
USA

2 posted 2000-06-30 06:34 PM

I love this one!!!  Well put!!

     Thanx!!

Click

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-06-30 06:47 PM

I love it too!! Wonderful imagery with so few words, great work

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

4 posted 2000-06-30 09:04 PM

Uta...yes, whoever knew what we would find, in those feral (wild) years....and having found it, what do we do with it? Exceptional piece.....Hardrock

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2000-07-01 01:37 AM

yes what will we find heaven, aliens who knows i wonder. very well put here. enjoyed it much.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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