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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738
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In these mountains able to hide, feelings of despair a tune of a lullaby. Will you love me come tomorrow? Will you love me even in your sorrow? This vast big land of gum trees and pines, would we live happily if given some time? The ghosts of past I'm sure they will ebb, lay down to rest in their own bitter bed. But what come may in ten years together, I'm sure we'll be happy and drift in love forever. ~ Tara ~ (1993) |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
I read this as a lover having self doubt about the future of the relationship....and then shutting out the possibility that it might not last. A denial. Nice work Tara....enjoyed it. Hardrock |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
A delightful poem Tara, so melodic, the images, the words ... I agree with Hardrock about the theme. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Beautiful poem Tara!! I , myself have asked those questions. Hmmmmm love.... it sure does turn ur train of thought.  Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I enjoyed this very much Tara, and agree with previous post, does make one stop and think too!!! |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I like the poem!! I like the flow!! Good work! Thanks. Click |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautifully written Tara. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great flow you make with your words. and a very wonderful read hope to see more real soon. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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