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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Am I just a shadow, lost to the light? If I had known, we were making memories, I would have done it right. Click |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
WOW what a great piece. i enjoyed it so very much and i hope that you will keep up your writings forever cause they are great. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Hey, so sad. A lovely poem, lovely in its sadness. I'm sure you're not a shadow, though, and I love your poems! Funny thing is, I wrote a poem called shadow yesterday (I haven't posted it here yet), but it wasn't anything like this one! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Woah! Powerful poem. If I had known, we were making memories, I would have done it right. Hmm... this just keeps on going round and round and round in my mind... Great work  |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Yes Click, every instant of our lives become life-long memories...We should all take more care in creating them. You are not a shadow...You are My friend. ~Sash~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well received message! A word is dead When it is said, Some say. I say it just Begins to live That day. Emily Dickinson |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Great piece here, Click....I want to see more. Enjoy your writings.....Hardrock |
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Nancee Junior Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 45Australia |
Ah, the power of precision. I agree fully with taramw. Well done. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Click,...echo,echo,echo....you are not a shadow. GREAT piece here. Here's to making it count!!! Take care. *Peace. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
EXCELLENT Poem my Friend!! Short but so to the point! (Dont we all wish we knew before hand  )Peace |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Enjoyed this one very much. Keep it up! Life be not God's greatest gift. Of what worth be life without the capability to love? |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes kid so would I have. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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