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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Its funny the way you hint Thats all we have now Few hints here and there Showing that you really loved like I did once Otherwise it doesn't make any sense Funny isn't it we've come all the way But I guess its not too late To get back to our real self To find someone who really loves May be its time I guess May be we can progress A life is not lived in mere hints Its really something I want to experience Not leading a life in virtual reality I really love you but I fear That I'm in love with the wrong person Who is love with another May be our time together is coming to an end Its some more time for my broken heart mend Sincerely A_L |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~A_L,...I could go and stick my nose where it doesn't belong and tell you not to stay in a situation that is not really working out, and that life is too short not to atleast be searching for true love,....but, I won't  . hehe. This is really a from the heart sort of poem that makes me feel for you. Great work. Take care. *Peace. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Thanks SF..its just a long and complicated realtionship which had its ups and downs..anyway she's cool with someone else... Sincerely A_l |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
loved the poem and hope to read more real soon and i loved how you expressed yourself here keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
A_L, an excellent poem! Hmm... really makes one think!  Enjoyed reading it very much. |
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