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Dark Poetry #2

the way life is

tearsinheaven
Junior Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 18

0 posted 2000-06-29 02:03 PM

Love is a tragedy
Friends never last
I fear the future
And regret the past

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

1 posted 2000-06-29 02:18 PM

So I guess all you have is the here and now....make the most of it. Good one, TIH. Hardrock

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-06-29 08:09 PM

Not all I hope.....but this is a good poem..says a lot in a few words.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-06-30 12:42 PM

great piece but i don't agree with the friends part my best friend has lasted years. but don't stop writing like this its wonderful.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

4 posted 2000-06-30 11:22 AM

I have felt these things many times, but don't give up! Who knows what you will find tomorrow!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

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