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Between darkness and Light is a war.
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Between darkness and Light is a war. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Between darkness and Light is a war. Isis Challenge Met Part 2!! < !signature-->As darkness descends upon the moist ground, watching my breath rise flowing through the bush like smoke drifting upward from the heat of my heart, pumping blood as I lay upon straw so lush. Thinking back to the time I heard Isis cry out from an unseen specter tormenting her mind. I’m looking around searching the woods for this apparition to appear, I can’t find. Now knowing it’s the ethereal I’ll have to travel readying myself and taking Isis soul by the wings. laying my head down and crossing the border of lights, here our battle is to be fought where darkness/light sings. In approaching in part, those souls of darkness haunting who’s delusioned souls had been released in the fight. Showing Isis that her deeds had been just, releasing what was good, freeing their inner light. Backing up to an overall view of the war between good and bad. Showing her the dark side had a fight, that was sad. Seeing this light that had fluttered up before her and with a bow said: “don’t you know me”? I’m the monster you just slaied, my darkness over shadowing the light non could see. You had opened my heart with your voice of steel laid waste to my blackness setting my light free letting my soul spread it’s wings showing the universe the power of Isis for all to see Returning to this world we created, our deeds tell our tale, with souls that glow upon opening our eyes, Isis smiled with knowledge that she did lay waste the bad to set free a golden soul. So unfurl your worrisome brow my love and set your course upon this vessel in this sea. sail upon and within these souls that only Isis can do killing the darkness to set souls free. This poem was met by a challenge to me by Isis You can find that poem called, Moments of Weakness Just click on the name of the poem and go to it. Thanks kid I need to wake up. haha Love ya. Joel. AKA “Solan” I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. [This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 06-28-2000).] |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
OH! I love this one! "So unfurl your worrisome brow my love and set your course upon this vessel in this sea. sail upon and within these souls that only Isis can do killing the darkness to set souls free." This is my favorite part of it, although the whole thing is just amazing work. It has a passionate plea and flow to it. I really love this one! Thanks for sharing. -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Challenge well met my wolf friend!!! I loved this it speaks wisdom of it's own!!! Thanks for the play hon.. I'm gonna print me this one  Bravo!!!!  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
joel you make me want to go read my dictionary to add more words to my vocabulary!! your expression and imagery created remain superiority in word form. i love how someone always helps save someone else here just a little bit. love ya kid!! kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Joel,...you're getting a whistle for this one. hehe. *WHISTLE*...*WHISTLE*. Hehe. Wow,..this is superb writing. Oh, and such a joy to read and follow the little tale. Bravo you two. Very cool. *Peace. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
enjoyed this much a great joy to read i long to read more like this from you Joel and i hope that you never stop writing cause i won't know what to do with myself. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Painting a picture with words is a talent...my VERY talented friend...I like the visual depth of the words. I also like the way it looks on my screen...You know, before I read it? Most of your poetry has "shape" to it, that is good to the eye when reading it. Ahh, shoot! ya know what I mean dude.. Thanks for the pictres!! Click |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Ok Joel, Im speechless, absolutely teriffic!!! I was compelled to read this more than once, keep writing please |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
some woonderfully dark images, intense and beautiful. When I looked into the darkness I used to see turmoil now I see a pale delicate flower called hope. Returning to this world we created, our deeds tell our tale, with souls that glow upon opening our eyes, Isis smiled with knowledge that she did lay waste the bad to set free a golden soul. So unfurl your worrisome brow my love and set your course upon this vessel in this sea. sail upon and within these souls that only Isis can do killing the darkness to set souls free. excellent Joel, challenge well met. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Excellent work. Very intense. (And I agree with Brian in highlighting the last two stanzas - outstanding!) Allan |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I thank you all, I just got back from a Bike run in Holester, I sat up my goods on the side street and sold my A** off, anyway thanks agin, I'll start my replys on Monday. HHHHHHOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWLLLLLLLLLL Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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