Dark Poetry #2 |
The Pain |
LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
The Pain feels so great In my heart A love that can not wait A Love with restrictions Tears fall; one is too many In my soul A love that sits silently A Love with real intentions Emotions go without reason In my body A love that is in question A love with many dangers The misery I cannot believe In my mind A love in desperate need A love circled in depression Wanting you, I can not have In my spirit A love without embrace A love deprived of aspiration Married, but love another In my everything A love that somehow happened A love that is forbidden |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oh dear, larbear. such pain here. why is it love is painful, no matter what you do?? ...a love with real intentions.... what a line!! i felt every word of this poem. not married, but definitely have loved and love ones that will never be mine. good for you for getting it out. keep em coming. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
Oh dear, I used to love someone so much, but he wasn't worth it, I wish I could love someone again, at lease you can love, I know that is not very comforting, sorry |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Forbidden love....such sweetness, such danger. Nice, well done. Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, "A love with restrictions". It sounds like we are going through the same thing. Its so hard, and yet so special and bittersweet. Good luck, I hope you can have her in the end.. Catalinamoon |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
All, Thanks for the comments: Forbiden love itself is painfull, left for tears. Wanting to have, so bad... and not being able too, is the part of life we dont understand. Just remember the experance and tuck it away deep down inside your heart. Love keeps the world smiling LarBear |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
forbiden love is so very painful i hope that you are past this in your life. and i to am bared with this same fate but for me it with last forever. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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