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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I have a big problem. Simply put, I am homesick. Sick with longing for a home I'll never have. Sick with need for a place I truly belong. So homesick it baffles me. And still, homeless... |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
don't feel so down theres always a place to call home. if not a house it can even be a place such as a beach its not the walls its the love for the place. but as always loved the piece. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- ideas flow through my mind and ink through my viens. so |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I like the idea here. So many homeless people out there, physically homeless, which is a terrible thing. But then there are also many who are simply rootless, and can never find a place where they feel they belong. Well done! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
To feel comfortable with ourselves in our surroundings is so important, and I know where your heart belongs...Nicely said!!! P.S You can take my "dream vacation" We can go together!! |
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