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DreamSeeker
Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72


0 posted 2001-01-06 07:35 PM


Damn you
the mirror
said

Damn yourself
the mirror
replied

Each trying
to stare down
the other side

This debacle
you have pulled
over me

Blanket
of icy
destruction

Waves my right
to the parishoners
pledged tithes

Beguiles the
very ceremony
of us

Now bantering quakeside
in forested eyes
we a singular

Apparition
born in the mirrors
lies

You're to blame
each side
of the mirror cried

Is it really shizophrenic
if you recognize
the others inside





[This message has been edited by DreamSeeker (edited 01-07-2001).]

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Ginners
Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
1 posted 2001-01-06 08:14 PM


Usually i can't even understnd what you write it just isnt what i am used to, but i really like this poem, i am not too sure i totally understand it, but i like it every much

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

Swamp¤Faeryie
Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)
2 posted 2001-01-06 11:46 PM


very thought provoking,the words you used were exquisite!!

sam


"All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon

BitterSmoke
Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 54

3 posted 2001-01-07 09:01 PM



Ha! I have had the same arguments.

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