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Dark Poetry #2
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BitterSmoke
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since 2001-01-02
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0 posted 2001-01-03 06:42 PM


  I knew a woman.
  Her tongue was like sandpaper.
  She drank double vodkas straight.
  Her hands could have belonged to Jesus.
  Her eyelids were blue and her cheeks were red.
  She did not want the light on.
  I hate hotel coffee.
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1 posted 2001-01-03 07:35 PM

Wow i really liked this one. A true piece of contemporary poetry.....wonderful!



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JOY 14
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2 posted 2001-01-03 10:37 PM

Ineresting, in a good way. Creative. I like.

Joy
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