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*prevailing*darkness*
Junior Member

since 2000-12-18

Posts 36
Port Richey, FL

0 posted 2001-01-03 12:17 PM

Something so beautiful,
you want to touch it
and hold it.
But once touched
it can NEVER fly again.
It is doomed to death.
Simply because of
one selfish wish,
to touch something
so beautiful
knowing it would end
in destruction,
but taking its life
for one moment of pleasure,
NEVER to fly again...

*Until you find something worth dying for, you're not really living*

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

1 posted 2001-01-03 01:24 PM

HEY Good poem here

Makes ya think some
about the topic.
(Yes I do think) lol

Mags

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2001-01-03 08:44 PM

I always looked on it as precious gift, and the one who 'receives' it must be worthy...
It's a precious gift once touched, forever lost, only the memories remain...
Quite eloquent in a way hon..
isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

*prevailing*darkness*
Junior Member

since 2000-12-18

Posts 36
Port Richey, FL

3 posted 2001-01-04 01:37 AM

Thank you both very much. It was something I actually wrote about rape, but I think it came out beautifully... thanks again!

*Until you find something worth dying for, you're not really living*

Scarlet Lady
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 242
Midwest

4 posted 2001-01-06 12:33 PM

Incredible poem! One that I shall keep and pass on to those that need to know how precious their sexual gift is. Thank you soooooo much for giving us this very special poem. < !signature-->

"I think you are looking for that right one and if they don't fit, then you punish them to fit what you want!"
"Change comes when the pain to stand still becomes greater than the pain to move."

[This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 01-06-2001).]

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

5 posted 2001-01-07 12:35 PM

This can be read in many ways, rape as you mentioned, a warning about moving too fast, too young, or just about the reality of it all. Well done.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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