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Dark Poetry #2

My world

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

0 posted 2000-06-27 08:32 AM

My world, one filled with pain,
not just from a broken heart but
from the dark interference of
chronic illness

I face each day with some
pretence, why complain..where
deaf ears fall

They rally around proclaiming
their love, while living in their
world, believing its my world
too

They do not know, how could they?
But try they say, make the best
of your life..How I try

I sometimes win the battle, but
never the war, I remember my
spirit, my world, a place I don't
want to leave until I know
unconditional love.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-06-27 08:53 AM

Love it Deb. Everyone at Passions, this is my good friend Deborah, friends since birth.
Submit them all Deb, I know we will love them.
Catalinamoon

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

2 posted 2000-06-27 03:33 PM

"...unconditional love" My wish for all of you. Well said, Deb. Don't stop writing....I'll be here, waiting. Hardrock

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-06-28 12:18 PM

yes don't ever stop writing. you are great at it. and all of us here will love you so keep up your great work and hope you find what we all look for.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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