Dark Poetry #2 |
Post Mortum |
BitterSmoke Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 54 |
Pain cleans me. Soft fermented grapes soothe me. Misfortune haunts me. But in the end, my old friend Lonelyness melts even the most crystalized heart. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, very dark. Loneliness does pain.....but hopefully we'll all pop out of it. by the way, welcome to passions! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Yes it does Good write here btw... Welcome to Dark Passions! Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
Welcome to Dark Passions. Judging from your first post, you'll find yourself in good company here. Sing while you may -The Prophet Qa'sepel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Qa'sepel |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Welcome, Welcome, Welcome... I hope your stay is a grand one. ...and loneliness , at times, seems. too, my welcomed friend. until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
Welcome to passions, i am looking forward to reading more of your work, i hope it will be soon, i really like this poem, even though t was a little short for my tastes, but it was very dark and nicely written. keep up the good work. and once again welcome to passions |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome!!!! Wonderful first post, Lonliness - a comrade but don't let it be a conquerer!! Isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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