Dark Poetry #2 |
Our Footprints |
LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Our Footprints Our footprints walk together side by side Hand in hand Heart to heart Feelings of love Feelings of passion Our footprints need no asking These prints do not follow They walk together Slowly one by one Slowly step by step From far to near From one to a hundred Our footprints are not too many These prints walk forward Parallel and in motion Ocean waves cover them Ocean breezeās blend them In unison they will go In tandem they will fade Our Footprints somehow remain Still together these prints travel Making paths, they sway Holding on, hand in hand Holding memories a lifetime As hands, soon loosen As fingers gently slide free Our footprints will drift apart Not knowing where they go These prints may walk free Around obstacles they roam Alone, a single print travels Some might find the other Some could stray away Our footprints will find each other Our footprints will walk together Well, What do you think? |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Your poem had alot of different meanings for me, I loved it. It made me think of differnt times in my life, and where my footprints may lead... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
these footprints lead you almost anywhich way you would like to go with it. enjoyed Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Did you ever notice that footprints only mark where you have been.....never where you will go? Excellent Larry....Do some more. Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes yes truely great work and please do keep it up. would love to read more. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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