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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-06-12 02:35 PM

    I only smile for awhile
         Before I die
Just another piece taken from
           The pie
         "Why o Why"
    Running shy and scared
        Without cares
       How will I Fair?
In this world with death defying
            Dares

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

1 posted 2000-06-12 11:06 PM

good Poem Has me wondering But I definetly like it
Blue

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

2 posted 2000-06-13 04:03 AM

just another piece taken from the pie......
whoa that hit me hard!! amazing how many slices in a heart, eh???????

once again, excellente'!!!!!! bravo!!

kynder

The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

3 posted 2000-06-13 08:01 AM

Yup! Scary thing life, isn't it?
These lines:
I only smile for awhile
Before I die
I love particularly!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

4 posted 2000-06-16 11:26 AM

Thank you all for your replies. they make me feel great. and i'll be checking out more of your work. but it's hard for me cause my computer blew up so bare with me

thank you IN kynder's words JJ

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

5 posted 2000-06-17 02:22 AM

Yes to be dared by the soul, the heart, the life.
How many slices are really there.
great I love this,
My child hood fancy was to be a daredevil, haha...
I didn't know it would come true with love.
love the idea kid.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

6 posted 2000-06-18 11:11 PM

thank you all for your replies and keep them coming on my poems and i'll keep bringging my replies to you.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul

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