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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-12-31 03:50 PM


I squint my eyes
And look out through my lashes caught in the way
The sun isn't even shining
I'm trying to make you laugh, okay?
I never was the class clown
Or even brash or bold
And
My kookiness I guess
"Isn't a genetic thing"
That's what I've been told
So even though I haven't got that cheap laugh sort of bone
You shouldn't cross me in a chicken wire
If you don't want your fowl to be flown
That's all there is
And Mr. Man
You can't tell me that's not pure gold!

I thought this place might need some cheering up.

HAPPY NEW YEAR!

Joy



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qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
1 posted 2000-12-31 07:03 PM


Awww that was a great poem & we need happy poems once in a while can't get too dark in here or i wont be able to see what im writin lol   Happy New Year!! LOVE ELMO <3
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
2 posted 2001-01-01 10:43 AM


Thanks Elmo. Amen to that!

Joy

brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
3 posted 2001-01-01 03:59 PM


enjoyed the poem, really loved the lines

You shouldn't cross me in a chicken wire
If you don't want your fowl to be flown

thanks the ray of sun shine.  

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2001-01-01 06:04 PM


Yes indeedy the more 'light' in here the better!!  Thanks for the smiles..
isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


Swamp¤Faeryie
Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)
5 posted 2001-01-02 08:50 PM


hey that was kinda cool!! i liked the words you used,esp. the part about chicken wire and flown fowl,kind of a tongue twister  

swamp


"All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon

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