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pardon me. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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here's a news flash: I don't need you I may have at one time but I've moved on I don't need anyone I know who I am and who I was I know what I am and what I was so, before you tell all your friends better think twice becuase there are two sides to every story and so far, they've only heard yours I've kept mine to myself because it's past it's done, no need to go over it we've both made mistakes and now it's time to go the only problem is you seem to think that the rules are different for you that you can do whatever you want you keep secrets, but expect to know everything you tell lies, but expect to hear the truth well, it doesn't work like that why torture me? you've found someone else let me go I've already let you go and I did find someone else myself. . . this just proves you don't know me as well as you thought you did. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hope you've 'purged' now hon. Those feelings are much better out than in. Hope you feel better for it, and that you're back on track where you're destined to be... *hugs* Isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow..a bit of a vent here!! Good for you!  |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
God what anger.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, without question. . . always better to have it out than in. . . does no good there. . . thank you my friend. . . deVine, yes, I'm venting. . . thank you!!  Lana, anger? Possibly, but I would say more frustration than anything. . . which is why I'm letting it go before it DOES become anger. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sven, you tell her! Some people just don't know a good thing when they have it, do they? So glad you found you, as YOU is a very special person. Luv ya Sandra |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
WOOHOO! If you were a woman, I would have to say hear me roar! But, you are not...so I will just say...excellent job on this one my friend. It shows a lot of depth in emotion. I think it is one of my faves now! Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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*prevailing*darkness* Junior Member
since 2000-12-18
Posts 36Port Richey, FL |
Ok, now pardon me, Mr. Are you inside of my mind and listening to my thoughts??? WOW!!! Great piece!! I should send this in a card to the ex fiance. This was brilliant. I've written one similar, but not quite this powerful. Love it!!!! *Until you find something worth dying for, you're not really living* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sandra, thank you my friend. . . I'm telling myself here more than anyone else. . . thank you for the thoughts. . . luv ya too. . .  sonjes, I'm not a woman?? *shoot!* LOL. . . but thank you for reading. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . *prevailing*darkness* (love this name btw!!), no, I'm not reading your mind. . . but are you reading mine??? Glad that you liked this one. . . feel free to send it wherever you think it will do the most good!! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vent, Rent, Rant, Rave.... well done! |
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