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Ina
Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2000-12-26 01:07 PM


hi everyone. im new to this so...i dont quite get it but ill try. it isnt very good im in a block

With eyes closed, ears blistered I feel
no pain, its not that it isnt their anymore
i just cant feel it
I call out your name in the inky sky but all
I get is the silence, a rumbling silence
you left me alone, my one bestfriend, decided
life wasnt what u needed anymore, but it was
what u hated
The anger I want to scream is stuck somewhere
between my heart and my head, wishes dont help
dreams keep me up walking up in a cold sweat
wondering what im still doing here,maybe it was
your path to leave me all alone, to let me suffer
you promised me a thousand promises and broke
every one, you arent my friend anymore, your just
bones
but forgive me friend,i still love you and I
cant quite hate you because you are all I wanted
and all I had in a world filled with hate.

Regina
aka Ina

© Copyright 2000 Regina Levy - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-12-26 06:57 PM


So sad for your friend that he/she felt there was nothing.. a tragedy.
I feel for you having to live on with questions that you will never get an answer for.  *hugs*  
Good work
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2000-12-26 08:57 PM


So sad    I could feel your pain in every word you wrote here.  But I do understand how it seems easier to just *sleep* than it is to keep fighting.  I also have been there and felt it.  
Anyways, I hope you are doing okay.
Great piece here,
Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Ina
Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada
3 posted 2000-12-26 09:01 PM


thank you both for your replies.it seems sometimes...that i caused his pain....you i have to blame someone....well thank u.
maybe i will write some more here.
REgina

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