Crossroads again (love version)

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Dark Poetry #2

Crossroads again (love version)

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-06-27 03:02 AM

   As i stand at these crossroads
             Again
I laugh with all my beloved friends
           Because
             Love
         Took the bait
         So i'm living
             Life
        To the fullest
             And
         Can't wait
             To
            Walk
       Through those
         Heavenly
          Gate's.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

1 posted 2000-06-27 03:31 AM

i know exactly what this is about. and jeremiah, this is beautiful. she reads your words and knows, even from above, my love.

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

2 posted 2000-06-27 03:52 AM

I like the concept of continuing the poem with the two possibilities here. Great idea.

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

3 posted 2000-06-27 04:01 AM

Love to live, yet can't wait to die....
reminds me of the phrase.. Lord I want to go to Heaven, but I don't want to die, without the dread of death

ChibiDeathscythe
Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 128

4 posted 2000-06-30 12:48 PM

Wow! Sorry I just got around to reading this, but I haven't been able to check up on the forums in a while :\
Great work! I love the Idea of how you streched this idea to the limits. Bery beautiful.

"Suicides have already betrayed the body.
Still born, they don't always die,
bu dazzled, they can't forget a drug so sweet
that even children would

Tosha Shook
New Member

since 2000-06-30

Posts 2

5 posted 2000-06-30 07:05 PM

hay I finally maid it on..now I will reply and tell you what I think of your poems...
Sorry I am putting you though this.....
Love your girl Tosha.......I love you

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