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Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

0 posted 2000-12-21 07:59 AM

I wrote this about my boyfriend after we broke up, when he read it we got back together a few hours later.

Ocean Angel

Waves crashing like screams only a few yards away,
More stars then we ever though we could see,
The moon covered the beach in a silver glow,
The sand was cold against my back as I looked at you,
Sitting in teh sand looking down at me with your smile,
You moved infront of a street light and it glowed behind you,
There was a fuzzy orange halo around your black hair,
You looked like an angel with the ocean's mist glowing behind you,
I smiled and thought you looked more like an angel than ever,
I see that image of you every night when I close my eyes,
My heart breaks to know that I have lost my angel one more time,
I will always love you, my ocean angel

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

1 posted 2000-12-21 08:19 AM

I am happy that you 2 are back together again ...
How can he not be moved by such heartfelt words?

~verve

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2000-12-21 08:54 AM

beautiful..Ginners...if only a poem could bring others together that easily

huggzz and a very Merry Christmas to the both of you

~Wynter< !signature-->

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-21-2000).]

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

3 posted 2000-12-21 04:32 PM

Thank you both and merry christmas

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2000-12-21 11:17 PM

I'm glad too, how could he resist.
Good luck to you both and Merry Christmas
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

liqwidnik
Junior Member

since 2000-11-04

Posts 33
Mantua, NJ, USA

5 posted 2000-12-31 03:17 PM

lovely sweet and touching good luck

liqwidnik
Junior Member

since 2000-11-04

Posts 33
Mantua, NJ, USA

6 posted 2000-12-31 03:19 PM

lovely great touching good luck merry christmas and happy new year

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

7 posted 2000-12-31 03:53 PM

What a great story to tell your kids! (maybe?) Anyway, lovely poem. Happy New Year!

Joy

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

8 posted 2001-01-01 03:46 PM

Congrats

Its a sweet poem I can see why he couldnt resist

LOVE ELMO <3

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

9 posted 2001-01-01 03:55 PM

enjoyed the poem and glad to hear that you two are back together.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

10 posted 2001-01-02 04:22 PM

Thanks guys!!! you made me smile and i'm havin a bad day!!!! good job!!

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