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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
Did I think it would last forever Yes I did, I'm not very clever Delusional lover, just a game crazy man, someone to tame If I tried to see what made you tick I would only find out your painfully thick I hate you I hate what you do I never want to understand what you are ugly man You are so screwed up selling fake ideals You think your so cool you can't live within the rule Reinvent myself who shall I be Sexy, Shy or a Mystery [This message has been edited by LuckyinLove (edited 06-28-2000).] |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
beautiful...i love it!!!  |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Whoaaaaaaa dont hold back so much next time!!  Great way to let it out!!Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
wonderful expression loved it let it out and keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
boy oh boy is this good!!! yeahhhhh i like the angry ones today!!!!!! excellent great wonderful raw powerful!!!!! man i want to read this again...... kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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