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JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-12-16 11:45 AM


Computer going out of wack
Hate this day
It's getting off track fast
It was snowing
Now's it's blowing
Blizzard before Christmas day
Relax
A word I've only heard
On a distant wind from the south
A warm breeze beconing me to come
Down and enjoy the Georgia sun
Internet on a freeze frame set
My mind is fried
My joints are bent
This day is just begining now
So before it goes bad
Let's turn it around!


[This message has been edited by JOY 14 (edited 12-16-2000).]

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firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
1 posted 2000-12-17 04:28 PM


I prefer the Florida sun myself...should have stayed down there instead of moving back to Ohio.  This was frazzling  

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

firecrakker
Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
2 posted 2000-12-18 02:51 PM


Amen, JOY!!!!  I like it!  

Sheila

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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2000-12-18 06:47 PM


Tru dat!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-12-19 07:00 PM


Damn straight, that is what we must do on days like that, turn it around as best we can and make the most of it..
Merry Christmas
Isis

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

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