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Winter's Mad Man
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Winter's Mad Man |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
I'm sickened By those bone chilling days Needing escape In so many ways. The insanity, misery, and pain The countless trips down memory lane. I shiver violently Like someone has stepped on my grave Realizing this life Is byond beying saved. For six days the sun has not shined And the dreariness tortures my mind. Closing in By these infinite killing walls I scream for help But no one hears my calls. Blood begins to spill from my ears Bringing to truth all of my fears. Looking back I can forever see your face Since that goodbye I have felt my misery displaced. Life leaves me through splitting veins Silence produces such a deafening strain. Old man winter Laughs as he spreads his disease When all we want Is to feel the warmth of summer's release. Taken from me is my innocense Trapped by my imagination's prison fence. Beating me down Just let me lay down and die From the wrath Of this eveil winter sky. Jeremy T. Sellers 12/12/00 11:06 PM "heaven can wait, heaven can wait, heaven can wait til another day" -Iron Maiden "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Very misdirected in many ways. Yet it has that lil *kick* to it. Ouch!!  Flowed very nicely, my Dear!  Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Wow.. you've captured winter's dismal presence so clearly, here. I usually love the winter, but this has truly chilled me. I love it...(I think). Sheila |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
*shudders* this really gave me a whole new perspective on winter ... Great work! ~verve |
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MysticWonders Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60Massapequa NY |
Winter time gives me the same feeling as if a love was gone....cold..dreary...and the days seem so long  Your a great inspiration, i admire your writing*S* If you can't be true to yourself...you won't be true to others :( |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Is it a metaphore...or is it Seasonal Affective Disorder Syndrome (SADS)? It appears to allow each reader to pick that which best suits him/her. Well done Jeremy. Hardrock |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. Wow.....i surely hope to read more from you!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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