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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
close all the entrances seal all my exits my body now a coffin for my soul so air tight i cant breathe i am slowly lowered and devoured by the sea she swallows me whole and takes me under and within drifting below the surface for a thousand miles she still wont sink me the darkness feeds my eyes patience runs thin and i await an end to a beginning i hated my air runs short and its to far to swim devistated lungs collapse and catch ablaze i open up and welcome the water in now she takes me home i will never be alone the corpse of entertainment washes ashore decays and rots away i love you is all i can say i have found my end i told you "I cant swim" "The biggest ocean can not stop a man from drowning" - Paul Watley |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I loved the choice of your topic. I also liked it how you described the journey towards end.  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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