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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Ok I got this thing for these colors lately but they won,t go away. Colors Colors of crimson run through my head Lavender feelings are spread Amber skies dashed with red Pitch black dark with twinkiling white lights Just before I go to my bed. heres a little something extra It is cold and I am quiet and my mind I can not control The tick of the clock I can not stop............ ok that didnt make alot of sense just a feeling in my head |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
now if you sit down and actually read this, it truly captures a moment. i can see you there, frantically writing, and then scratching it out, does it work, is it saying what i yearn to be heard??? i love this, those, one, two , however you like!! i read it as one, a moment in your life. thank you for the view. once againnnnn we relate!! loves ya!! kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
with out such a colorful world where would we be? keep life colorful!!!  |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes i agree black and white is so duel. though i prefer the black sometimes i like reds and greens thanks for posting this it gives great ideas. keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
If I could express my world in colors..very interesting and I enjoyed it very much. Keep creating its fun and it has meaning!!!! |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
I liked the way you expressed your feelings. Even the ticking of the clock..I believe we have no control over time...So that last stance fit.. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Bluebrdy....thanks for inviting me into your bedroom....no wait, uhh, that didn't sound nice did it? Well, you know what I mean....nice work. I especially liked the part about the stuff in your head...that's where all mine comes from (See For all you Trekkies) Hardrock |
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