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Moments of Weakness (Challenge for Joel) Part 1??
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Moments of Weakness (Challenge for Joel) Part 1?? |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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'Oh Solan they visit me,' 'They are haunting me in my dreams!' 'All those I've slayed in the name of peace,' 'Are trying to rip me apart at the seams!' 'My little one,' he said, As he took me within the shelter of his arms, 'You've done all that in the name of good,' 'It's normal to revisit the dark but I shan't let you come to any harm!' 'Make them stop!' I pleaded to Solan, 'I'm almost afraid to shut my eyes!' 'In my soul there is only darkness,' 'And a murderous past I despise!' 'In the name of all that is holy!' 'Know that your cause is just!' he said, 'Know that your past sins have been cleansed,' 'As a Goddess you do what you must!' 'Is that all I'm ever to do?' 'Kill, kill and destroy?' I cried. 'Teetering on the edge between good and bad?' 'Feeling like my soul has died?' 'Solan there is something missing!' 'Sometimes I no longer see the light!' 'Will all I amount to simply be,' 'The Goddess that chose to fight?' OK JOEL HERE IS THE CHALLENGE YOU FINISH THIS POEM OFF, IN YOUR OWN THREAD TELLING ME AND US WHAT SOLAN DOES TO CONVINCE ISIS THERE IS MORE... HAVE FUN MY FRIEND!!!!  [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 06-28-2000).] |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
and this my dear isis, is what my double blank emails have told. that once a upon sometimes, even your soul is tired and old. how do you not tire of darkness and death all the day long? i said to you, lean on me, fill my email account up, mine were blank, now obvious to me that it is you that needs to be heard, so please, let me listen, i plead. my name is not joel, and solan i do not know, but lisa is my middle name, bet that YOU didn't know!!!!!! i love you, isis. a friend in me does lie.forever, kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
kynder, Isis is ok. . .let me assure you. . . this poem is merely a figment of her imagination. . . and a good poem at that!!! Simply wonderful Isis, and I know that Joel will do a masterful job with the rest of it!! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great piece as always and joel will have fun with this one. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
hahah well kid. haha. My timing really sucks. haha. I'm going down to my instructors Dojo with a bunch of my students, on Tues, night. so I won't be able to do this untill ?? Wed night. I hope that's ok??? anyway I'll take my recorder and write on the drive down. so it will be finished when I get back. see you Wed. love you kid. haha Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
interesting to see the outcome |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Kynder thanks hon but Sven is right I am ok, it is merely a fantasy poem... Joel that is fine I will be eager to see the outcome of this little fantasy, glad you took the challenge, have a safe trip!! Thanks everyone I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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