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The Gates Of Hell
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The Gates Of Hell |
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Gman New Member
since 2000-11-16
Posts 2 |
The gates of hell Open up wide For the stories I tell Hidden in lies Pain and despair Destruction and dismay I’ve seen it there I live it each day Take my hand Please, hold on tight I'll do what I can Not to lose you tonight Walk my streets Talk with me Hear my heart beat Then drop to your knee The louder it becomes Entrapping every thought As your soul succumbs To what can’t be bought The love in me Is filled with your pain Can’t you see It’s all in vain So now you know It’s all in here You can go But live in fear |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Dark perfection, omens and all. Really enjoyed this dark peek into the inner self.. Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Maybe...add a good dark beat to it, and you have one hell of a gothrock song...kudios... THE SPOON RETURNS! Spreading insanity, one post at a time "Way back in eighty-seven, where we bust rockstands till we get to heaven" |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
What an ending!!! Loved it  ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Great work! Simply love the really dark ring in this one ... ~verve |
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